Finally, we come to the story proper, beginning with the very first chapter on giving STRATOS a formal introduction. First impressions are essential since it will either engage the reader to continue reading, or turn him or her off and put the book away.
Here's the beginning paragraphs:
In the secrecy of classified operations and hidden agendas, STRATOS—Special Task-Force for Rapid Action on Threat Obliteration and Suppression—emerged as an elite armed force assembled to combat evolving threats to national security. Strongly funded by a coalition of influential figures within the intelligence community and private sector, STRATOS operated outside conventional military jurisdiction, its existence known only to a select few.
Omega Base, nestled deep within the Rocky Mountains, served as STRATOS' clandestine headquarters. A marvel of modern engineering, the covert base blended seamlessly with its scenic backdrop—camouflaged entrances, advanced security systems, state-of-the-art laboratories and assembly facility—concealed within the mountainous terrain to create an impregnable fortress.
Inside the base, the team has access to an arsenal of cutting-edge weaponry and technology. Its huge armory houses the latest advancements in firearms, surveillance equipment, and unique experimental prototypes. The Shadowhawk, the team’s hybrid aircraft, occupied a hangar that is self-contained and equipped for rapid deployment.
This is followed by an introduction to the seven-member team based on the bios mentioned in a previous post. Then a final wrap up detailing the plethora of top-notch transportation craft, enhanced battle outfit, sophisticated weaponry, and more importantly a highly intelligent virtual assistant—EVE, the nerve center of the whole operation.
An ending paragraph to link this chapter to the next:
But all these cutting-edge wizardry, however impressive and powerful, could not have realized their full potential without a unifying intelligent entity—a soul if you would—to orchestrate and synchronize their operation into a collective whole.
EVE.
Seamless transition. Now for a much deserved coffee break.
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